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:iconpinkiesmileplz: Oh man....am I paying for this comic. Talk about sacrificing your body for an epic comic. I stayed up until 6am trying to finish this for today.....and I'm paying for it. :faint: I really need a nap.


Anyway onto the comic....HUZZAH! Back to pure canon based comics. They are always the most fun to work on....although this one was sooo tough to sketch up. :pissed: I tried 2 new ponies....the twins and man they are A LOT trickier than they look. Those heads....UGH....such a pain to get right. Did the final 2 sections of Sugar Cube Corner so now I have technically drawn all of the first floor of SGC in 3 comics. :)


So guys....I'm...too tired to write anymore. Really hope you guys liked this comic....truely didn't think it would turn out this good based off the paper sketches. Comments or critiques are always appreciated. Remember I will reply to EVERY single one. :D


Time spent: 24 hours over 5 days
How I did it?: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Pinkie Pie, Twilight Sparkle, Pound + Pumpkin Cake Lauren Faust
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Critique by true-shazb0t Jan 23, 2012, 1:05:41 AM
I love this comic. To start with, it's very funny. The flour gag was good enough on its own, and seeing Twilight's reaction to Pinkie's... methods is downright priceless. I'm surprised nobody else has done this, in fact - so full marks on Originality. This is 100% in-character, and it absolutely sells the humor.

However, the art is a little iffy. The backgrounds are fine, but the ponies need a smidgen of work: if you're going for a show-accurate style, you need to work on the faces a little more. Proportions are ever-so-slightly off, especially with the eyes in panels 2 and 3 from a head-on perspective. The flour could also be a little poofier - if it had come out in a massive cloud in panel 5, it would be more exciting to look at, rather than just a little blip of spillage. As it is, it's a little abrupt, and the viewer has to use a little too much imagination to fill in the joke. That would have been tricky, of course, and I recognize that. An easier "fix" might be to make Twilight's eyes bug out a little, as she sees what's coming - it's about Twilight's reaction, after all, so it would be appropriate, too. As it is, it's the one missing detail that stops me from giving 5 out of 5 for Impact - if that weren't an issue, the "punchline" delivery would be flawless.

My only other quibble is that I'd have the Baby Cakes doing a bit more in panel 1. Have Pound Cake actually pounding blocks together, and/or have Pumpkin Cake levitating a block around. Just a little something to spice it up a little.

Other than that, fantastic work. I instantly fave'd.
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:iconcandythekat:
CandyTheKat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student Digital Artist
SHE'S A GHOST!!
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:iconlightingspaz:
LightingSpaz Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
pinkie just trolled twilight :D Troll!!! 
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:icondragontamer360:
DragonTamer360 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA I REMEMBER DAT EPISODE XD LOL
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:icontwilightsparkle2013:
twilightsparkle2013 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Wow. That just made me laugh so hard, I almost cried. That's a Rarity, if you will.
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:iconadamscamaroz28:
AdamsCamaroZ28 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
:iconpinkierimshot1plz::iconpinkierimshot2plz::iconpinkierimshot3plz:
:iconpinkierimshot4plz::iconpinkierimshot5plz::iconpinkierimshot6plz:
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:icontwilightsparkle2013:
twilightsparkle2013 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, yeah. I get it. It's a bad joke. It was begging to be done!
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:iconadamscamaroz28:
AdamsCamaroZ28 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I actually quite enjoyed it.
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:icontwilightsparkle2013:
twilightsparkle2013 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awesome!
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:iconthejayster49:
TheJayster49 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't get it
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:iconzelda-lover306:
Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
In one of the episodes, Pinkie Pie babysits the cake twins, and quickly discovers that they laugh whenever she opens a bag of flour over her head, causing her to get covered in flour. She does this several times during the episode, to keep them happy, and they do it for her at the end, because she starts to cry out of frustration of her situation, which quickly got... out of hoof, if you will.
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:iconthejayster49:
TheJayster49 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! OOOOOHHH! Now I get it. Thanks
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:iconzelda-lover306:
Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
No Problem.
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:icontifzhe299:
tifzhe299 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It would show Twi their habits is you have Pound pounding the blocks and Pumpkin with a pacifier.
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:iconking-homo:
king-homo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love sugar
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:iconmatchmakingdove1028:
matchmakingdove1028 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
0____________________________________________________________________0
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:iconsecretlaser:
SecretLaser Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pure fun
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:iconpowersourcearts:
PowerSourceArts Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No she isn't
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012   General Artist
:iconpinkiepieplz: No! =P
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
That's very WHITE of you, Twilight...
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:iconmadman12000:
madman12000 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
Breaded Twilight? Sounds delicious!
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:iconsandperv:
SandPerv Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist
Twi will never get Pinkie logic (and neither will we)
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:iconel-drago-800:
El-Drago-800 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Pinkie has logic? :-?
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:iconsandperv:
SandPerv Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist
well we dont know Pinkies mind lol
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:iconel-drago-800:
El-Drago-800 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
I don't think Pinkie knows Pinkie's mind. LOL
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:iconsandperv:
SandPerv Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist
nope not even lol
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:iconmylittlepony1212:
MyLittlePony1212 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
pinkie has no logic mind, after all she is the element of laughter. not logic. hahahahahahahhahahahahahaha.
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:iconsandperv:
SandPerv Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist
considering what we have seen as of now even i question her logic...whatever it is.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconsandperv:
SandPerv Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist
cause bringing logic into a cartoon or a video game is a dangerous thing lol
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:icone-man300:
E-man300 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
sadly, she's not
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
indeed
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:iconthatrevmans:
thatrevmans Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is fantastic as usual. I love your comics
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
appreciate it
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:iconthatrevmans:
thatrevmans Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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:iconjoebrony:
JoeBrony Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Good one :D
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :D
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:iconolightningx:
OlightningX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
As I always say: Bukakke makes EVERYTHING better!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconpinkiefan1287:
pinkiefan1287 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
The pick was good, but maybe you could have the twins laughing at Twilight or had them doing something else.

Still a very good and funny pic.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconiaintyourmailgirl:
iaintyourmailgirl Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AAAAH! TWILIGHT GHOST!!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:P
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:iconiaintyourmailgirl:
iaintyourmailgirl Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:p
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VoltronZ1 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Writer
Hehe, cute. Those Baby Cakes always bring me a smile whenever I see their cute little faces.

Hmm...... You know I've always wondered of what would happen if the Family Cakes got this man to do the baby sitting. [link]

Yes, that man. LOL!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see.
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:iconlittle-kitsune:
little-kitsune Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Photoshop? how do you get those awesomely smooth vector lines?!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They aren't vectors.....but I use the paths tool...it helps a lot.
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:iconlittle-kitsune:
little-kitsune Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
ooo interesting, I'll have to look into that :D
you make it look so awesome o w o
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:iconsandwich-anomaly:
Sandwich-Anomaly Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
kidding... pinkie... NNAAAWWWW
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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