Oh yeah a CMC comic. Think it's been 2 months since I did a pure CMC one and boy did this turn out good in my book. The paper sketches of these panels were some of the worst I've done and that made my lineart task in photoshop more of a pain that usual. However I did it!
Please tell me I wasn't the only one that thought what would happen if Applebloom and Sweetie Belle saw Scootaloo stuck to the pole. I kept this canon right up until the last panel....it was suppose to be a sweet little comic but I decided instead to completely change it and go for a comedic approach with Derpy.
Discord - "what do you think, you like?" I think the overwhelming response to this comic will be "yes, I like very much!". This was not an easily comic at all. I work ALL freaking night to get this out in 2 days. Somehow I pulled it off and I'm paying for it today. Now if you'll excuse me I need a nap. Comments guys?
Time spent: 18-19 hours over 5 days How I did it?: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
well now. With the beginning, i like the way you made Apple Bloom Confused, and Sweetie Bell Shocked. however, i would add just a bit of ScottaLoo's Tail in there too. the distance doesn't make sense otherwise. and with Ditzy and ScootALoo, make their speech a BIT more slurred, as your tongue is a huge influence to the way you talk. if your tongue isn't there, your speech is gonna be messed up, like Ditzy would be saying "I luff Caundy Caunes", because of her tongue. ScootALoo would be more like, "Dun't Ashhl", and i would understand, because of the freezer and myself last ngiht. overall though, with the exception of the speech Candy Cane, i love it!
This is a very good...for lack of a better word "Copy" of the art style used on the show. You have the characters looks and behaviors nearly down to a science. And buy that background looks like it was a pain in the arse to draw as well XD. for me there is just one thing that could have made it...,maybe more realistic and maybe a little bit funnier.
If you had made the text reflect how somebody would actually talk..for example.
"I gut myshhhel stuk on thish ting get mee off"
It could have made it a little more funny.
But its an awesome piece and a very Christmasy one as well
With the beginning, i like the way you made Apple Bloom Confused, and Sweetie Bell Shocked. however, i would add just a bit of ScottaLoo's Tail in there too. the distance doesn't make sense otherwise. and with Ditzy and ScootALoo, make their speech a BIT more slurred, as your tongue is a huge influence to the way you talk. if your tongue isn't there, your speech is gonna be messed up, like Ditzy would be saying "I luff Caundy Caunes", because of her tongue. ScootALoo would be more like, "Dun't Ashhl", and i would understand, because of the freezer and myself last ngiht. overall though, with the exception of the speech Candy Cane, i love it!
If you had made the text reflect how somebody would actually talk..for example.
"I gut myshhhel stuk on thish ting get mee off"
It could have made it a little more funny.
But its an awesome piece and a very Christmasy one as well
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