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HUZZAH! A new record for a comic! I actually managed to pull this off in one livestream sit down...or one night if you prefer. Usually I like to break a comic up into 2 parts when I get in into photoshop. Lineart + Coloring, night one...background night two. The shear fact I did this all in one night is stuill stunning me.
So this is a comic I let you guys decided who should be the star if some snow fell onto a pony. I know some of you wanted Filly AJ but I have a seperate comic for her coming up cause I want to draw Applejack more again.
So yeah this comic is literaly so simple that I don't need to explain it. I was going to add buildings to this but I will save that for another snow comic planned. 
Anyway what you guys think? Don't worry Fluttershy is alright. It's just snow.
I think this will be the last comic out before Christmas...so let's just say that now. Merry Christmas guys! Comments? Lol I know if I ask for critques I'll get another 10 of them. 
Time spent: 5 hours
How I did it?: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
Filly Fluttershy © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
So this is a comic I let you guys decided who should be the star if some snow fell onto a pony. I know some of you wanted Filly AJ but I have a seperate comic for her coming up cause I want to draw Applejack more again.
So yeah this comic is literaly so simple that I don't need to explain it. I was going to add buildings to this but I will save that for another snow comic planned. Anyway what you guys think? Don't worry Fluttershy is alright. It's just snow.
I think this will be the last comic out before Christmas...so let's just say that now. Merry Christmas guys! Comments? Lol I know if I ask for critques I'll get another 10 of them. Time spent: 5 hours
How I did it?: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
Filly Fluttershy © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
Image size
1338x3311px 1.19 MB
© 2011 - 2024 Toxic-Mario
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Overall Vision
Originality Technique ImpactI really like this image it is definately clear what is going on. The colours are well balanced and the scene is conveyed well throught the movement of the pony.
I think to improve you could rearrange some frames, to create a better flow to the narrative. Use pauses less often and in different places. Allow the reader to experiance before the last frame anxiety about the pony before we know they are okay. So many a pannel with just an image of the snow pile and no text. You could make this section more tense by using elipses or shadows.
Overall though I think this is a really well done piece, keep up the good work.