"Well Rarity, it took forever but it was worth it!"
After 7 months...I FINALLY....FINALLY can say I have a Fluttershy comic. She is by far one of the hardest to come up with good comics for and was one of the reason I never had one. Still for not drawing her, I pretty much nailed her drawing. Literally perfect.
So it's been a while since I did Fluttershy and Derpy so let's combine the 2 into likely the most random comic I've EVER done so far. Fluttershy's enjoying a muffin....Derpy snatches the Muffin jar...that's random. I win! Huzzah how many internets do I receive?
Anyways this was a fun comic to do. Whenever I create a comic even I can laugh at, you know it's a good comic. I love to marvel and laugh at the comics/drawings I do. I get a lot of satisfaction out of it and can put me in a good mood. So guys...what you think...you like? Comments?
Time spent: 15 hours over 2 nights How I did it?: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
hmmm... Nice work but I couldn't help but notice that fluttershy's eyes are wrong, the eyes you have drawn look like rainbow Dash's and AppleJack's...
And, you should work on the wings. Because in all three panels fluttershy's wings are up and no signs of flapping have been shown. No pony can fly like that without flapping
And in the 2nd Panel, You should have put some smudges or movement lines behind Derpy so that it shows clearly, that she snatched the Muffin Jar and flew away. Other than those mistakes, I must say I'm pretty impressed, Considering I'm still having trouble drawing a simple Applejack and Rarity on a paper >.< Lol! Great job
I must say i have also noticed something abut Derpy as well, her belly is a bit flat ,she is suspended so it should be free falling.
and no pony has a shadow but everything else does. not along with the mistakes others have mentioned.
otherwise it is adorable.(man this critique stuff if hard so many words la la la la la la la pease let this end soon 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 )
And, you should work on the wings. Because in all three panels fluttershy's wings are up and no signs of flapping have been shown. No pony can fly like that without flapping
And in the 2nd Panel, You should have put some smudges or movement lines behind Derpy so that it shows clearly, that she snatched the Muffin Jar and flew away. Other than those mistakes, I must say I'm pretty impressed, Considering I'm still having trouble drawing a simple Applejack and Rarity on a paper >.< Lol! Great job
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