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Submitted: December 13, 2011
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Snatched Upby *Toxic-Mario

Digital Art / Drawings / Fantasy

"Well Rarity, it took forever but it was worth it!"

After 7 months...I FINALLY....FINALLY can say I have a Fluttershy comic. She is by far one of the hardest to come up with good comics for and was one of the reason I never had one. Still for not drawing her, I pretty much nailed her drawing. Literally perfect.

So it's been a while since I did Fluttershy and Derpy so let's combine the 2 into likely the most random comic I've EVER done so far. Fluttershy's enjoying a muffin....Derpy snatches the Muffin jar...that's random. I win! Huzzah how many internets do I receive?

Anyways this was a fun comic to do. Whenever I create a comic even I can laugh at, you know it's a good comic. I love to marvel and laugh at the comics/drawings I do.

I get a lot of satisfaction out of it and can put me in a good mood. So guys...what you think...you like? Comments?

Time spent: 15 hours over 2 nights
How I did it?: Paper + Photoshop CS5

PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.

Fluttershy, Derpy © Lauren Faust
Art © Me

Critique by *LittleHyena12 Jan 10, 2012, 8:26:31 PM

I absolutely love this comic. (Has there ever been a comic of yours I don't like?) But I thought I'd stop by and point out a few things with my nit-picky eyes.

First off, I couldn't help but notice Fluttershy's eyes are wrong. It is extremely important to get characteristics like that correct! ;D

Also, I couldn't tell what was happening in the second panel at first. Maybe add some movement lines or smudges behind Derpy Hooves so that it looks like Derpy's moving across the screen? And so it looks like it's flying, perhaps add some up-and-down movement on the wings to suggest flapping.

My apologies if I'm sounding rude or picky but overall I think this is a wonderful comic and at least 90% better than I could do xD

As for the good things, I love your technique. I never miss a livestream of yours and when I do I go back and watch it (recorded). I love the way you draw ponies and I adore your backgrounds. Two thumbs up for your magnificent art, ToxicMario.

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Critique by ~WolvesMoonDance586 Dec 18, 2011, 10:30:51 AM

This is a great comic and I think all the expressions are great! Your style looks exactly like the MLP FIM series and the coloring is great.

But alas, there are some things you should work on. I think the front arms on Fluttershy on the first and second panel look a little bit off anatomy, and it isn't a normal pose. Trying eating cookies like that! XD Also in the second panel, i had to stare at it for a minute to get what was going on. I think you should make movement lines when derpy moves because I didn't know which was he was coming from. Or make more of her so that her face and arms show of the muffins in her hands. Sorry if I'm being tough DX

All in all, this is a MARVELOUS piece, and I love the backgrounds, ponies, and the EXPRESSIONS! XD