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I wanted something based off Scootaloo sleeping in class. I totally can relate to this myself during my years in high school and very rarely in college. This is literally how my teachers handled the situation if you fell asleep. 
Once again...tried a new BG....inside the school house. Though this wasn't gonna look good but after playing with it some more it came out nice. That doorway was nver planned but man what a difference it made.
So....hope you guys enjoy this one. Onto the next comic....and that one is quite complex. Commnts? Critique?
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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In vision, you get a 4 out of 5 for the good idea you had. The characters fit in and the way you made it is great.
Originality also gets a 4, because we've all seen the sleeping in class act before, but its still hard to get bored with, especially in pony version.
Your technique is really good, if not slightly flawed, but nothing practice and perfectionism won't fix.
The impact gets a fair 3.5, because despite the fun we're having with this, it's still nothing tremendous.
The humour, whilst certainly simple compared to many other MLP comics I've seen, does it's job of being funny and good-humoured without going overboard or stepping into any unsure territory. As for the main joke itself, I may just be imagining things but I might have come across this joke once before, so I'm afraid on that basis I'm going to have to reduce the originality score somewhat.
Overall, this comic falls square in the middle of the artist's spectrum of work. It not the best made by the artist, but neither is it unsatisfactory either. The art was clean, the humour was good and whilst there may not have been too much in the way of complexity, it was still an enjoyable comic. I'd reccommend giving it a look.
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