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April 30, 2012
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:iconmlproidrageplz: YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Easily my new favorite comic.


Let's see here.....Comedic situation, Check. Swag sunglasses, check. Make fun of a meme, check. Draw Roid Rage for first time ever, Check. Annnnnndd draw the superb show quality comic BGs I'm known for, CHECK! :D


No muffin in this...and once again I keep having to say this...these are not vectors, they start from paper, and I do all my BGs by hand. :) Comments are always appreciated!

Time spent: 26 hours over 5 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.


Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Roid Rage © Hasbro
Art © Me
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Critique by ~Weirdduder10 May 2, 2012, 2:13:27 PM
Vision: Perfect drawing choice, but i expected Twilight to put the sunglasses on with magic, which makes alot more sense since she would originally do that. And im wondering why twilight started moving right while talking since the background was moving from panels 4-5. Great, but could've been better.

Origin: This joke got very overused too much. Although its very humorous, its been used atleast a hundred times. And the big muscly pony saying YEAHHHHHHHHHHH is very original too since he is ALWAYS saying that.


Great comic. (P.S, Where did the big muscly guy even come from? OH MAH GOD)
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Critique by ~fw35726 Apr 30, 2012, 11:33:40 PM
Humor: I think it would've been funnier to have Twilight complete the joke instead of Snowflake. He's too obvious a choice, and ruins what could've been another adorkable moment for Twilight. It's her being an egghead that would've given the joke a nice variation, since I'd expect someone cooler like Rainbow or Pinkie to do it. Also, the premise is a bit forced. Why does Rainbow go to Twilight for help? A simple added line like, "I need you to help me find the culprit/look for clues/solve the mystery" would've explained everything; you don't want people to focus on the wrong details.

Perspective: I also agree with the previous critique that the background is too distracting. I read it expecting something to happen from out of frame, and so Snowflake's appearance was less surprising to me. I think a back-and-forth angled view of their faces mixed in would've been better than a side view the whole time. The wider view should be saved for the end. The panel layout is fine and works well for reading while scrolling down.

(Accidentally posted this as a comment first. Oops.)
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~GeminiJC Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg, yes. CX
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*Toxic-Mario Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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~PowerSourceArts Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Striod pony ftw
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~OkamiNagihime Oct 4, 2012
I was reading the critiques, and i thought the first one's comment about that joke being overused, is irrelevant. It's funny BECAUSE that joke is overused; it's a meme. It's SUPPOSED to be overused. I thought it was clever using the YEAH pony because all the comics I've seen that use the CSI: NY joke put the original NY background and just type "YEAAAAAAAAAAAH" across the top. That's not very creative. But the use of snowflake is. And the ponies have to at least do this joke once. I thought it was well done. :D
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*Toxic-Mario Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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~OkamiNagihime Oct 5, 2012
np. :D
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!RarityRainbowLover Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
xD i died again.(sorry for the stampede of comments)
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~Cream-Soda-Kitten Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol.
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~flyboy21141 Aug 5, 2012
I read this as I was singing along to a Deadmau5 song, and at the final panel, I was cackling. Well done.
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*Toxic-Mario Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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