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Submitted: April 30, 2012
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Nutty Situationby *Toxic-Mario

Digital Art / Drawings / Fantasy

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Easily my new favorite comic.

Let's see here.....Comedic situation, Check. Swag sunglasses, check. Make fun of a meme, check. Draw Roid Rage for first time ever, Check. Annnnnndd draw the superb show quality comic BGs I'm known for, CHECK!

No muffin in this...and once again I keep having to say this...these are not vectors, they start from paper, and I do all my BGs by hand.

Comments are always appreciated!

Time spent: 26 hours over 5 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5

PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.

Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Roid Rage © Hasbro
Art © Me

Critique by ~Weirdduder10 May 2, 2012, 2:13:27 PM

Vision: Perfect drawing choice, but i expected Twilight to put the sunglasses on with magic, which makes alot more sense since she would originally do that. And im wondering why twilight started moving right while talking since the background was moving from panels 4-5. Great, but could've been better.

Origin: This joke got very overused too much. Although its very humorous, its been used atleast a hundred times. And the big muscly pony saying YEAHHHHHHHHHHH is very original too since he is ALWAYS saying that.

Great comic. (P.S, Where did the big muscly guy even come from? OH MAH GOD)

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Critique by ~fw35726 Apr 30, 2012, 11:33:40 PM

Humor: I think it would've been funnier to have Twilight complete the joke instead of Snowflake. He's too obvious a choice, and ruins what could've been another adorkable moment for Twilight. It's her being an egghead that would've given the joke a nice variation, since I'd expect someone cooler like Rainbow or Pinkie to do it. Also, the premise is a bit forced. Why does Rainbow go to Twilight for help? A simple added line like, "I need you to help me find the culprit/look for clues/solve the mystery" would've explained everything; you don't want people to focus on the wrong details.

Perspective: I also agree with the previous critique that the background is too distracting. I read it expecting something to happen from out of frame, and so Snowflake's appearance was less surprising to me. I think a back-and-forth angled view of their faces mixed in would've been better than a side view the whole time. The wider view should be saved for the end. The panel layout is fine and works well for reading while scrolling down.

(Accidentally posted this as a comment first. Oops.)