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:iconmlproidrageplz: YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Easily my new favorite comic.


Let's see here.....Comedic situation, Check. Swag sunglasses, check. Make fun of a meme, check. Draw Roid Rage for first time ever, Check. Annnnnndd draw the superb show quality comic BGs I'm known for, CHECK! :D


No muffin in this...and once again I keep having to say this...these are not vectors, they start from paper, and I do all my BGs by hand. :) Comments are always appreciated!

Time spent: 26 hours over 5 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Roid Rage Hasbro
Art Me
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:iconteenbulma:
While your art is fantastic and the fact you do your own BG's for each comic is amazing in itself, I have to say it still looks pretty stale. I've noticed lately that mostly every comic you do the ponies are just genericly standing there.

I think they would be a little more appealing if you do some panels where its just the faces of the ponies or something dynamic. Instead of zoomed out whole bodies, why not try just the torso and up for one panel? Or even more zoomed and focusing on the facial expressions. It would have been perfect for the panel where Twilight puts on her twililicious swag glasses. I think it would help the comics be a little bit more funnier than they already are and give it more depth. It kind of just looks like copy paste the whole thing through. Change it up a little!

As always keep 'em coming, I love your style and sense of humor :) And damn those muffins for always being tedious.
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Humor: I think it would've been funnier to have Twilight complete the joke instead of Snowflake. He's too obvious a choice, and ruins what could've been another adorkable moment for Twilight. It's her being an egghead that would've given the joke a nice variation, since I'd expect someone cooler like Rainbow or Pinkie to do it. Also, the premise is a bit forced. Why does Rainbow go to Twilight for help? A simple added line like, "I need you to help me find the culprit/look for clues/solve the mystery" would've explained everything; you don't want people to focus on the wrong details.

Perspective: I also agree with the previous critique that the background is too distracting. I read it expecting something to happen from out of frame, and so Snowflake's appearance was less surprising to me. I think a back-and-forth angled view of their faces mixed in would've been better than a side view the whole time. The wider view should be saved for the end. The panel layout is fine and works well for reading while scrolling down.

(Accidentally posted this as a comment first. Oops.)
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:iconskittle141:
Skittle141 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcutedashsmileplz: Hey, Twilight!
:icontwilightconfusedplz: What, Rainbow?
:iconcutedashsmileplz: Your jokes... :iconswagrainbowdashplz: drive me NUTS
:iconmlproidrageplz: YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! 
:icontwilightfacehoofplz: I can't even...
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:iconjake-greek:
Jake-Greek Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
yeeeeaaaaaaaaaaa!
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:iconjarekzjezioran:
JarekzJezioran Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Rainbow won't get fool again ;)
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:iconpisicutzamiau:
PisicutzaMiau Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
If she doesn't have peanut butter anymore she can eat Nutella :) (i like nutella)
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:iconhereticalrosepetal:
HereticalRosePetal Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Too sweet for my taste.
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:icongoldenponyz:
GoldenPonyZ Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
:icondashfacehoofplz: Couldn't resist could you, Twilight?
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:iconsora200:
Sora200 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
LOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!
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:iconderpyhooves2026:
Derpyhooves2026 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Hey,pinkie cousin!member me,suprise!
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:iconderpyisintown:
Derpyisintown Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Wow......
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:iconicecrystall:
IceCrystall Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i got it
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:iconmlplover12321:
mlplover12321 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol
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:icon149bonnie149:
149Bonnie149 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
I did laugh:D Great job!!!
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:iconageknight10:
ageknight10 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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:iconsunburnt-bliss:
sunburnt-bliss Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I made a dub! [link]
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:iconemeraldbeam:
emeraldbeam Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Twilight Sparkle has SWAG!! :D
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:iconriekachuthepony:
RiekachuThePony Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconenteringthenethery:
EnteringTheNethery Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
this needs to become the ponified pilot comic for a new meme
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:icongogetaandfuyomalover:
gogetaandfuyomalover Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH i thought she said someone stuck peanut butter down her something hole....
MY GOD I NEED BETTER GLASSES!
*wipes eyes*
XDDDD
(p.s MY GOD THAT WEIRD HORSE!)
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:iconzodgeneral:
ZODGeneral Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
CSI miami?????
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:iconsashauna11:
sashauna11 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
uhhhhhh
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:iconsecretlaser:
SecretLaser Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
My glaaes
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:icongeminijc:
GeminiJC Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg, yes. CX
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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:iconpowersourcearts:
PowerSourceArts Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Striod pony ftw
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:iconokaminagihime:
OkamiNagihime Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
I was reading the critiques, and i thought the first one's comment about that joke being overused, is irrelevant. It's funny BECAUSE that joke is overused; it's a meme. It's SUPPOSED to be overused. I thought it was clever using the YEAH pony because all the comics I've seen that use the CSI: NY joke put the original NY background and just type "YEAAAAAAAAAAAH" across the top. That's not very creative. But the use of snowflake is. And the ponies have to at least do this joke once. I thought it was well done. :D
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconokaminagihime:
OkamiNagihime Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
np. :D
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:iconrarityrainbowlover:
RarityRainbowLover Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
xD i died again.(sorry for the stampede of comments)
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:iconcream-soda-kitten:
Cream-Soda-Kitten Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol.
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:iconflyboy21141:
flyboy21141 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
I read this as I was singing along to a Deadmau5 song, and at the final panel, I was cackling. Well done.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012   General Artist
Oh no, he's back!! XD
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:iconpippicat:
Pippicat Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student Writer
This is just...so hilarious! :rofl:
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:icontokageki:
Tokageki Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
WAT!!! i spend over half and hour looking 4 da muffins b4 i read the description sytateing that there wasnt any muffins!! argh, Celestia solar flaring mare-heat!!!!!
also, that guy is halariously buff wit uber small wings. he's on steroids (or buck) so hard that it defies the lws of (equestrian) reality, lolz!!!!!
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:iconxilent-knights:
Xilent-Knights Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gotta love Twi with her sunglasses
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconbryfury:
bryfury Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
lol-wut?!?!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yyes
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:icongrimreeper2121:
grimreeper2121 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
YEEAAAAAHHHH!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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:iconprincess-midna:
Princess-Midna Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have gained so much skill in drawing ponies! Your drawings look like the official art now!!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
almost
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:iconanunfoldedpapertiger:
AnUnfoldedPaperTiger Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Writer
Then it looks like

*Puts on Sunglasses*

I'm going to have to CRACK this case wide open

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!
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:iconcutiepuppyfire:
cutiepuppyfire Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Their gonna be in a JAM
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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:iconcutiepuppyfire:
cutiepuppyfire Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
Eeyup
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
...And when caught, the officer will them to SPREAD 'em...
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:iconthomaskimbler:
ThomasKimbler Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
gaaaawd, this was soooooo corny! huh?
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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