Very cute work and suits Fluttershy's and Derpy's personalities rather well. The ponies look nearly as they do in the show and look lively. The story is nice and short and given in enough pictures. The colors are good and it's in good size. I love the expressions on the ponies. An admirable work which shows your talent in drawing really well. You'd make many people absolutely envious. Overall I have to say that it is one of the best comics I have seen from My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic-fanart. Needless to say, I love it. I hope I shall be seeing such works from you in the future as well.
I really like the way that you portrayed Fluttershy's kindness to not only animals, but to other ponies as well. From the fact that they are on the ground (and my knowledge from reading various Fanifics) my guess is that Fluttershy and Derpy have been friends since they dropped out of flight school, together I'm guessing? I really like calm setting and I really like the amount of thought and work you put into this piece. Derpy and Fluttershy are two of my favourite characters and I feel that you have portrayed them in this very well Brilliant job overall.
The colors are good and it's in good size. I love the expressions on the ponies. An admirable work which shows your talent in drawing really well. You'd make many people absolutely envious. Overall I have to say that it is one of the best comics I have seen from My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic-fanart. Needless to say, I love it. I hope I shall be seeing such works from you in the future as well.
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