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Just Give it a Try by Toxic-Mario Just Give it a Try by Toxic-Mario
Well this was a very interesting comic to com up with a name for. I had several ideas floating around in my head but i decided to go with a simple one. Sue me. :XD: Oh and new record! 27 hours!


Anyway I wantd to try something I RARELY do....a pre-episode comic but this time I had a perfect reason how Rainbow could have ended up in the hospital. Rarity! :iconpinkiepienoesplz: Kind of could make sense especially since she said Rainbow was gonna get it.


I had a lot of fun and trouble with this comic. I basically winged everything on the background cause we really have no clue what the hospital setting will look like....yet. I love when I have the ability to free draw new stuff like that! :D Anyway I love how this came out. So what you think? Comments? Critiques? :)


Time spent: 27 hours over 5 days
How I did it?: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Rainbow Dash, Twilight Lauren Faust
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Pretty funny comic. Rarity did say she was going to get Dash! :D
5 stars for vision and impact because it's clear and easy to see what you're going for here.
As far as originality, I have seen this idea of Rarity being the one who put poor Dash into the hospital before, but I don't think I've seen a comic made out of it.
Technique appears good, though in the first few panels, Twilight's face appears a bit too long. Her face could probably stand to be a little bit shorter. Also, the wrinkles in Dash's blanket seem a little flat. That may be a matter of personal preference, but I tend to give my wrinkles a bit of a hook at the very end of some of them(a bit like a 'j'), since fabric tends to fold over itself a little bit when wrinkled. And the balloons could be just a little bit bigger.

Overall, funny idea and great comic! Keep it up!
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I loved this one right from the start! Yeah, it seems that quite a few people seem to make the joke that Rarity is the one who PUTS Rainbow Dash in the hospital, but that only means that a LOT of people find the idea to be funny.

I hate to say this, but I had to mark you down a star on technique. Don't get me wrong, your art is stupendous as always, but... you kinda reused the frame a bit much. This could have been done in a more compact comic, saving yourself quite a lot of time.

Vision... again, I hate having anything negative to say about your work... leading with the punchline, and ending without it is a bit of a no-no where comedy is concerned.

Hopefully you find this helpful. Love ya, Toxie!
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sophie123456789a Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Photographer
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
What I heard when I saw the title:
Would you try, just give it a chance. You might find that you'll start to understand
A true, true friend helps a friend in need.A friend will be there to help you see.A true, true friend helps a friend in need,To see the light that shines from a true, good book.
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Foreshadowing at its finest.
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:iconpandalaimon:
Pandalaimon Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
:{D  Wowzers!
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:icontruecere:
truecere Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
boo
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:iconchasenote:
chasenote Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
again?
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:icongogetaandfuyomalover:
gogetaandfuyomalover Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yep! thats me!
..................
only with 49 book from the library
and a bookshelf about to break apart,
XD
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Cream-Soda-Kitten Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I just watched the episode when they show how they got their cutie marks, with Applebloom, and, You should show how the characters got THEIR cutie marks!
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:iconmatt0044:
matt0044 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
This episode honestly was made with Bronies in mind. I SWEAR!
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012   General Artist
I like the original reason she ended up in there better.
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:iconpaulrap:
PaulRap Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
What is the book?
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:iconcream-soda-kitten:
Cream-Soda-Kitten Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Daring Doo and the Crusaders of the Lost Ark.
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:iconaskteamdraco:
AskTeamDraco Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
What book was it?
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IDK
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:iconaskteamdraco:
AskTeamDraco Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Okie dokie lokie!
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:iconlonekid:
lonekid Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Daring Doo and the Crusaders of the Lost Ark
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:iconaskteamdraco:
AskTeamDraco Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
HUZZAH!!!! With her in charge, we'll need saving!!
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:iconlonekid:
lonekid Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
why?
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:iconaskteamdraco:
AskTeamDraco Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ditzy Doo? She flew west to get the birds staying south. No further explanation needed.
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:iconlonekid:
lonekid Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
I said Daring Doo. She (I think it's she) is le pony version of Indiana Jones.
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Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
This comic has been brought to you by the National Education Association.
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:iconfoxysruxys:
FoxysRuxys Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Reading Rainbow~
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yyes
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madman12000 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
Reading - it'll make you smart!
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PonymanXX7 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Was this before or after you found out theres al almost EXACT episode based off this idea XD you could technically sue em ya know, you'd make millions XD
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
before
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TheAnimeIsis Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O
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:iconponymanxx7:
PonymanXX7 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THEN YOU HAVE THE RIGHT TO SUE THEM!!!
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:iconlimbothedonkey:
limbothedonkey Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this was before the episode? xD thats funny.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it was
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:iconlimbothedonkey:
limbothedonkey Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thats epic. its like you went into the future :la:
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:iconjulezrulez77:
JulezRulez77 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Was this before the episode?
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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yayayayayala Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :D
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yayayayayala Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
you welcome
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BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
This may have been said already, but a better punchline for this comic would've been Dash finding out that Twilight left her Rarity's diary.
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True but I stuck with a pre-episode comic XD
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Kousagi7Yami Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
And then they did this episode O.O You must be psychic
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDD
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Ogihci2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Piccolo: NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRD!!!!

Hehehe, Good job I liked your style.
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks.......i learned the style by dodging hate mail
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Ogihci2 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
I'm sorry I made it sound like hate mail I was trying to making a reference to Dragon Ball Z Abridged. *bows* Please accept my apology.
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jaimeah Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Student Artist
:iconflippybumrushplz:
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IloveDERPY Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Rainbow dash tryed to brake the 4th wall like what pinkie does but broke herself in the process... also failed to get through the fourth wall
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDD
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Ponytendo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
Rarity used her magic to make RD crash. :P
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDDDD
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yamashta Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your lining technique would look better if it were crisper.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A little but it's close enough
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