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In the Tub by Toxic-Mario In the Tub by Toxic-Mario
Apologize for this random comic. :P Not gonna lie....this is hands down the weirdest comic I've done in 10 months. IDK where I got the idea for it....I just wanted something odd where Gummy mistakes this bathroom for Pinkie's. :XD: There's no bad messages here....just one hell of a random comic to break things up once again.....with an element of comedy in it.

But hey I finally drew Gummy and Dinky for once. :D Granted I have better idea for Dinky this Summer but eh....this will do. Also could have cheaped out on the BG but went with something more substantial as usual.

Anyway hope you like this. This is once again not my best comic...duh but it's something to hold you over till the next ones. Think of this as a mini-comic.....comments always helps. Onto the next one. :P

Time spent: 15 hours over 2 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5

PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.

Dinky, Gummy Lauren Faust
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We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but
You're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see
What do you think?
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92 out of 115 deviants thought this was fair.

Well, I'm going to be honest and say that this is one of my first critiques, however I love your work so I hope I can start here :)

Vision: Honestly, I personally didn't think it was that bad of an idea. If you didn't have a 5 star drive for it yourself, then it's hard to give you a 5 star from mine :/ . As well, I think you perfectly portrayed the random, cute, and somewhat meaningless, yet worthwhile comic you were looking for.

Originality: I can personally say that I have never seen anything with Dink and Gummy in the same comic/fanfiction/short/flash/anything else. I think that the only thing that is even close to un-original is that dinky and derpy have been used quite a few times, however this makes the comic what it is so, its hard to say something about it :)

Technique: From the first panel to the last, the reader can see scenes from my little pony that never existed, yet look like they belong in the show. Only one question rises: How do you do it? Your technique matches that of the shows almost perfectly. Well done, 5/5

Impact: The impact of this comic was....well it made me smile :) . I wouldn't, however, say that you were intending for a major impact comic here. All that aside, even the "random" comics you draw are full of originality and amazing backdrops, which impacts me quite largely. The story (ummmm....story?) was I guess a little...lacking, but that made the comic for me.

Final: A well drawn comic always deserves appreciation, whether it's for fun, vent-work, or something you spent a lot of time on. If I had to improve anything , I might do something about that.....bucket on gummy's head for it seems to dissapear in the last panel. I presumed the duck went over it, however my logic says it would simply push it. However, what does my logic count when there is a unicorn in a bathtub with an alligator?
What do you think?
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ArtisticNinjaCat Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Holy cow!! I would freak if Pinky Pie's pet alligator or crocodile popped up into my bath!
BonBon1Heart Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Student Artist
L-O-L all i need to say is L-O-L
powerpuffgirl111 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dinky inherited the derp.
TaniIda-Chan Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconderpplz: In the last panel. Derpy's daughter! Obviously!
omicron-hedgehog Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Her name is Dinky.
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Creepy... :fear:
ZDForrest Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
Shoulder's achy 
WolfSamurai000 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dinky is so cute!
Blossomleafstylez Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
uhhhhm... hi??
123cupcake Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
articfoxice Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Student Artist
did he swim in the drain?
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wonder why Pinkie Pie lets him do that. So unsanitary!
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Wrong tub?
TheKillerShaymim Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
And that is how Derp-Questria was Made!
DocterWhoovesFan Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
maybe that's how Derpy became derp eyed XD
Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Actually, that pony is a unicorn named Dinky. Derpy is a Pegasus. Also, Dinky is Derpy's daughter.
koolkait Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
dinky: MOM! gummy is looking at me!!!
dinky: yeah he is looking at ME
derpy: *slams door open* GIT OUT! IM TELLING PINKIE TOO!
gummy: ...
Kovu96 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If you think about it, Gummy appears, and disappears, and, though he doesn't talk EVER, his act in this comic, when Dinky talks, and he then disappears, is like, "You didn't see anything." And poof, he's gone.
bond674 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
gummy went down the drain and back home
jacobgillaspie Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
I was linked to this from an outside source and I gotta say this made me laugh! I'm not a huge fan of MLP or anything but I am amused by some of the art that comes with the fan-base. Thanks for giving me a laugh :)
gogetaandfuyomalover Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is that derpy? or is that her sis?
Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
No, that's Dinky, her Daughter.
sashauna11 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
just like hr mom
Nik-Naks Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
GX3D Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dinkie's Thoughts "Mom?"
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
clumsyme22 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student Artist
pervert gummy
RANDOMNUMBERS8192 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student
Gummy herped so hard, Dinky derped.
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012   General Artist
I thought she'd freak out.
PaulRap Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
Oh-no, now she's like her mother now!... can that be considered a bad thing?
bunniesrule6 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
dinky doo is derpy's daughter
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
bunniesrule6 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
pretty much
MetaSyke Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
Dinky's getting derpy-eyed like her Mom
Valiant-Horizon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student General Artist
I think the same thing happened to Derpy. That would explain a lot of it don't you think.
rayquaza008 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
This makes a lot of sense
KianaMatteo Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Artist
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
rphb Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
You should do one with Dinky and his Mother Derpy, these two are so cute togetter.
BigDream64 Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I hafta admit... yes, it IS weird. But good comic! LOL
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD thx
DeRaza360 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
FUN-NEIGH! :iconiseewhatudidplz:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AACrashBurn Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
Very funny and random!
Love the derped look on her face at the end! XD
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tking101 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist
There's an aligator in the tub!
Jenny8239 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Pinkie's knees are ACHY!
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