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:iconfluttershysqueeplz: Daawww explosion round 2! Hehehe let's have another tug at your emotions. Oh and muffin...it's suppose to be there but oh well....find it. :P


So yeah this one has been in the works for about a week now. Just got to it and man I literally threw the kitchen sink at this and basically have almost all the buildings I've ever done in this as well as like 4 new ones. :P Fluttershy I have possibly being a jerk to Derpy somewhere after she left on the taxi. So....


I'll keep this short....have things to do for the rest of...well...now. But yeah hope you guys like this. Comments are appreciate and the critique here and there. Onto the next one. :D


Time spent: 25 hours over 5 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Fluttershy, Derpy Lauren Faust
Art Me
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:iconbatman0889:
this is your best so far i mean the last ones won't that good as this and from what i've seen that saying a lot.
the art is the normal standard from toxic-mario.
the story is nice not too much toying with the episode but rather as a side story of are two characters having a moment as friend this is a much better side story from what i've seen so far and i love it.
it a very good comic and i think your heading in the right direction in how to make a good comic.
i give my derpy best 10 out of 10
very good work keep it up.
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34 out of 38 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconsintakhra:
This piece is a true example of taking a canon event and using the imagination to foresee what happened -beyond- the episode. Once again you have taken a simple "I'm sorry" message and constructed a setting which tugs at everypony's heartstrings.

Your use of backgrounds is once again inspired, I know for a fact you spend a stupidly amount of time on them and it really does show. It is the little things you notice, such as Panel 4, you can see the tip of the roof of one house, and as you zoom out in the next panel, you can see an expanded rooftop as the viewer's perspective changes.

Obviously there are a lot of contributors to the whole "Fluttershy made them cry" bucket so in terms of originality it does take a knock, but the quality of this piece sets it so that even though it is the next in a long list, it is hardly worth overlooking.

One criticism i have is in your technique for the Eyes. You aim to follow the style of the show and you succeed in most ways, however Fluttershy's eyes are one of the few characters who have a unique style. I always think something is weird when i look at her with the default eye style you find on background ponies (Take a look! She really does have a unique eye style)
But this is a niggling concern, one belonging to someone with OCD and an eye for small details.

The impact is what truly matters and it most certainly succeeds. The simple dialogue conveys emotions far beyond what you would expect and it is hard not to just go D'aww to the hug at the end with the subtle easy-to-miss tears of our dearest yellow pony.

Am happy to grant this a deserving 8.5/10!
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:iconartisticninjacat:
ArtisticNinjaCat Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Now that is true friendship 😄
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:iconflutter-butter55678:
flutter-butter55678 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  New member
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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:iconsilvergriffinflare:
SilverGriffinflare Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG SO CUTE!!!





THE FEELS.......
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:iconsophie123456789a:
sophie123456789a Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Photographer
Mlp Forgiveness Is MagicForgive me!Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me!  
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:iconbadwolf1000:
BadWolf1000 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww That is just too cute!!
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:icondragontamer360:
DragonTamer360 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Panel 2: She's...her eyes...are...perfect... RUN! THE END IS NEAR!!
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:icondalekcaos:
Dalekcaos Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
TOO CUTE, SISTEMS FAILING, ERROR ERROR ERro.....
*sparks flying away and smoke*
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:iconshibara:
Shibara Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Hey! This is just absolutely adorable! Uhm, so I was wondering if you'd mind if someone else and I had permission to voice this and put it on youtube? I've been told I have an absolutely adorable Derpy voice and if you want to hear it yourself I already have one comic I've voiced on youtube, and I have to say that my companion has an absolutely adorable Fluttershy voice so we'd love to make a bit of a collab and do this together if we could. Though, I don't want to do anything like that without your permission. 
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sure go ahead
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:iconckrella:
ckrella Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I found the muffin! *gives muffin to derpy*
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:iconpawn1212:
pawn1212 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
That's the power of soldier....i mean friendship
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:iconpytko3:
pytko3 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
There is something fundamentally wrong with seeing either Derpy or Fluttershy sad.
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:iconcrelyous:
Crelyous Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
My feelings!! ;w;
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:iconkatban:
katban Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconshyponygirl:
ShyPonyGirl Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
found the muffin
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:iconajax94:
Ajax94 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Loved this one much more than Rarity's
Don't ask me why, I can't find the answer! :3
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:iconmlpfimpegasister:
mlpfimpegasister Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
cute
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:iconmakuta700:
makuta700 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
MY HEART
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:iconnanorider426:
Nanorider426 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
D'awwww!
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:iconmorlord:
Morlord Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Our world would be so kind and peaceful
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:icongiromcalica:
GiromCalica Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Warning: Short-term exposure from this comic can lead to the corruption of your pancreas.
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:iconkoolkait:
koolkait Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
panel 2: WHHHAAAT????
panel 3 : OOOHHH
last panel: DAAAWW
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:iconcircuitsandwires:
CircuitsandWires Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Aw yeah, I found the muffin!
Also this is adorable~ I love your comics.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconaralaas:
Aralaas Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aaaww :thanks: I really like your comics; It's nice to know we can still have good stories without blood, sex, drugs and murder, just cute little stories with colors and friendship :)
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's what I do
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:iconawesomeguy888:
awesomeguy888 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
DAWWWWWWWWW!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3
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:iconchrismilesprower:
Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
AWWWW How sweet of Derpy. This comic really warms my heart. I want to hug Derpy and Fluttershy right now.
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:iconpurpledynamo:
purpledynamo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
aww paww daww paww
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012   General Artist
AWW!! :D
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:iconsaullaski:
SaulLaski Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Student General Artist
d'aaaaaaaaw. it's all i have to say. Including two of my three fav ponies, and getting the real idea of the show. I agree with ~PrincessPeachCat, and hope you'll have a job at Hasbro. Good graphs, and good understanding of the show.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconsaullaski:
SaulLaski Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student General Artist
ya welcome~
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:iconjosiah-shockency-jcs:
Josiah-Shockency-JCS Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Every passionate! ^V^
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:iconvaliant-horizon:
Valiant-Horizon Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student General Artist
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:iconzefg123:
zefg123 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
so cute
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconrainbowdash267:
rainbowdash267 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student
how did his saddlebag get broken
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fluttershy
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:iconrainbowdash267:
rainbowdash267 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student
fluttershy should give him a new saddlebag and some muffins
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:iconask-eclipse-pony:
Ask-Eclipse-Pony Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
her*
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:iconthe-only-nyx-sparkle:
So much D'AWWW!

They say a picture is worth a thousand words. This is bullshit! This one is worth at least twice as much =)
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:icondoublecleffthebrony:
DoubleCleffTheBrony Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
....*tear*
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
If only the REAL world could forgive this easily...
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:iconstealthlead:
StEaLtHlEaD Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
This is amazing, great job!!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconilovesonic4:
ilovesonic4 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
WHAT I IF TOLD YOU
YOU READ THE TOP LINE WRONG IN THIS COMMENT (maybe. people are different)
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