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Submitted: April 13, 2012
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Hey Thereby *Toxic-Mario

Digital Art / Drawings / Fantasy

Pinkie, why you mess with my lovely panels? I was still working on them.

And muffin is somewhere.......

Anywho this was a fun little 4th wall comic I put together for once in ONE livestream. Haven't done that in over 4 months.

Not since my snow Fluttershy comic have I pounded down a full comic like that. I am pleased with the way this turned out. Very simple but get the job done.

Well I got nothing more. Enjoy guys. Comments always help.

More comics coming!

Time spent: 8 hours
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5

PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.

Pinkie © Lauren Faust
Art © Me

Critique by ~IamCaptainMan Jul 22, 2012, 8:08:14 PM

Fourth Wall: YOU ARE TEARING ME APART PINKIE

Vision: Smart. It has the kind of art where it literally addresses us and we follow Pinkie's voice until she pulls up the background.

Originality: I can't give this a five, for the obvious Pinkie breaks the fourth wall gag. But I CAN give it four for the first 3 panels.

Technique: VERY Well made I love the idea that we are following her voice. And the way she pulled up the background like that was well thought out and made.

Impact: Very funny. ENOUGH SAID

Over all: Its just another great Toxic Mario comic. great work!

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Critique by ~Weirdduder10 Apr 28, 2012, 7:16:25 PM

Great artwork i have to say, Every time! but i notice some problems with the dialogue sometimes. and when she says "Down here" i get a little confused since the character (you) looks left instead of down. and then she says "Almost there", it goes back into the same panel as the 1st and 2nd. Very counfusing, but in the meantime it is also funny. if you can just fix those few, it would be better. The part i love the most about this comic is that when she stretches the panel, everything stretches with it, Originally, people would keep the same but it would be cut off a little. Unless those werent problems, and she was literally supposed to be at the bottom bottom of the panel, it really just makes enough sense! Great artwork,
~weirdduder10

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~AvelynnOC 4 days ago New member Hobbyist General Artist

Pinkie, you broke the fourth wall.

~MarenMoo Apr 4, 2013 Hobbyist Artist

hahaha i love this!!!

~RoseDragon1 Mar 20, 2013

RD1: Pinkie, wait until no one's looking to bend the comic.
Pinkie: But...
RD1: Thanks for visiting anyways. You're only one of a few that actually does this. SO, don't get down.
Pinkie: Thanks. Can I get a smile?
RD1: