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Fishing For a Laugh by Toxic-Mario Fishing For a Laugh by Toxic-Mario
:iconparty1plz: Happy birthday to me. This comic is my birthday present I did for myself. I love it so much. Last Roid Rage comic for a while.


What better way than to combine Roid Rage, a spongebob joke, Shining Armor, and Filly Twilight all together into an epic comic. This was one of the more tricky comics to draw...mainly the BG. Still this comic came out much better than the paper sketches looked. ;P


So yeah that's all I got. Time to celebrate my birthday. Comments always are appreciated. :D


Time spent: 24 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Twilight, Shining Armor, Roid Rage Hasbro
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Well Happy Birthday, have a critique!

I can mostly say good things about this comic. The style is remarkably accurate, especially Twilight's mane in the very last panel in terms of perspective (if you readers are curious, go watch "The Cutie Mark Chronicles" and pause at 13:09). The lines are smooth, no bumps or uneven widths. The background looks like a lot of work went into it.

Now for a very short paragraph of the hiccups. The horn is a tad bit too pointy, try rounding out the end a little bit, and the distance from the fourth horn line (the one near the tip) shouldn't be too long, if you want you can watch the "B.B.B.F.F." song and examine his horn during the number. The next too don't really count as mistakes, just my preferences. You outlined the "YEEEEAAAAAHHH!" speech bubble, but did not do the same for the previous speech bubbles. It'd be nice to outline those too, to be consistent however either way there is no set standard. Any particular reason for the Times New Roman-ish font? Usually I see Comic Sans, oh well, no harm done.

On to the explanations!

Rating Explanations

Vision: It's a joke and therefore doesn't necessarily need to express a "point of view, theme, or idea." I don't see any of the aforementioned in this comic. Other than a long shot guess "the CSI 'YEAH!' jokes need to be used correctly and properly." I guess harkening back to the Spongebob Squarepants episodes of the Hillenburg era would count as a theme.

Originality: I don't remember seeing a comic joke in this genre where a joke is interrupted, so, four-stars (and a half) for you!

Technique: You progressed very quickly from your recent comics; being hand drawn along with my comments earlier, I can't think of any rating lower than 5-stars.

Impact: Nostalgia, laughter, and self-thought Maybe we should be moderate in using a lot of CSI jokes at one time? A good chuckle from a good (not good, GREAT) artist.

Congratulations on your birthday and on another great comic!
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:iconkawaiiocatvia:
KawaiiOcatvia Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015
WHAT THE FUCK WAS DAT ITZ WAZ ZO FUNNY XDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:iconfnaf-and-tf-collin:
Fnaf-and-tf-collin Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
bulk biceps: ow...
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
......I don't get it. Her joke, not the comic's joke.
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:iconmisscheyandannie:
MissCheyAndAnnie Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Chey: Good Shining Armor Hit the weird pony with a book
Annie: Didn't you do that to Helen?
Chey: NO! I DIDN'T!
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time1102810 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
that was unexpected 
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Sonamyandppg0329 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG I just died I love this!( I didn't litteretly die I am very much alive)
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:iconinvaderpucca:
InvaderPucca Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
We know you're not actually dead if you posted the comment in the first place.
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:iconsonamyandppg0329:
Sonamyandppg0329 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well I didn't want people to be smart about it be like then how did you post the comment? You know?
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InvaderPucca Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Well I'm sure there'd not be that many people to think you're actually dead. uvu (Unless it was spam and you were talking about yourself and how you died.)
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Sonamyandppg0329 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea but you'd be surprised how many are smart allecs about it
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:iconthetnknownbrony:
thetnknownbrony Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
GOOD GODDAM JOKE
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:iconadickson10193:
ADickson10193 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
gosh, that's funny so much. (laughing) :)
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:iconzoey888vgtech:
Zoey888VGtech Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
XD
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:icondanidash:
danidash Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL by the way I believe ShiningAramers glow around the horn is a light blue so just saying
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:iconrarisparkle:
Rarisparkle Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Artist
Facebook.
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:iconlinkzilla:
Linkzilla Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Really threw the book at him..
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shouldn't Roid Rage (aka Snowflake) be younger in this comic?
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:iconfictionfeather-pony:
fictionfeather-pony Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Happy happy birthday, to you, yes you hooray! ;)
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:iconsweetscandies:
Sweetscandies Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
WTF?!!!!1111!!!!
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:icondaisysong907:
DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
lol XD
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:iconderpyisintown:
Derpyisintown Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Yeeeeyyyyyhhhh!!!! (Gets book slammed In face)
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:iconfriendlykuromi:
FriendlyKuromi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Artist
lol
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:iconveeturtle:
veeturtle Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I didn't ge the joke but I laughed at the random big guy and Shining's reacion.
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:iconchakrafox21:
Chakrafox21 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Snowflake dont care
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:iconsexyluna825:
SexyLuna825 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Artist
WTF ROID! NOW YOU DESTROIED MY FAVORITE PONY'S LIFE :iconcryforeverplz: WhY!!
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RiekachuThePony Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Haha that was the besr
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:icontimstro59:
timstro59 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
honestly, when I first saw the title for this, I thought it said "Fisting", WOAH, DOUBLE TAKE!!!
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:iconderaza360:
DeRaza360 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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:iconponymanxx7:
PonymanXX7 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol, classic XD
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SecretLaser Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
good job
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:iconthegreatwalholio:
thegreatwalholio Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Spongebob reference? Check!
Roid Rage? Check!
Facebook'd? Check!
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:iconkasil10:
Kasil10 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Where did he come from?!
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:iconprimthekitty:
Primthekitty Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Sooooo funny!
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:iconaug325:
aug325 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Roid-Rage breaks the laws of time and space for visual jokes.
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:iconraritylover1424:
RarityLover1424 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Lul
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:iconsilvermoonthewolf:
Silvermoonthewolf Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
PWNED :D
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mhm
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knucklesfan290 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
while reading my friend comes up and says : ew i hate MLP look at something else.
guess what? she not my friend anymore. MLP FOR EVER!!!!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:P
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:iconknucklesfan290:
knucklesfan290 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
XD
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:iconcyborgorchestra98:
CyborgOrchestra98 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHA WHAT???!!!!
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:iconkillerdanielx:
killerdanielx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
what do you call a book that hits someone on the face? Facebook...
that joke was SHIT! you have the rights to kill me
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:iconmdizzle999872:
mdizzle999872 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Shining Armor...LIKE A BOSS
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:iconpowersourcearts:
PowerSourceArts Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me: yyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconzephyrthedragonlord:
ZephyrTheDragonlord Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOLZ! the inapropriate party colt has been cued properly.
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:iconnova20cp:
Nova20CP Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
...You know, that joke wasnt half bad.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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:iconstrong-1:
strong-1 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Colt Roid Rage LoL
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mhm
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