Ok....I'll say this now.....people have been demanding I get the eyes finally in the MLP style.
I got sooooo pissed off at some of you saying I couldn't do them. Well....anytime I get that....time to prove people wrong. Pinkie in the second to last panel....IDK why her eyes are off but oh well.
Anywho I finally got this out. This would have been out last week but I got soooo tied up in the collab comic with Tsitra360 that took 4 days. Forgive me if I withhold my apology cause that collab was awesome.
But time to get back to my stuff.
Overall I'm pleased with the way this turned out. I took my time with this....I HATE doing sweet apple acres....all the trees...it's worse than Twilight's library.....ok maybe not.
I find it amazing I do better at building settings now than outdoor setting. Anyway what you guys think of this comic? Like it? Comments and the occasion critique is helpful. I read them all remember.
Time spent: 20 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5
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Rainbow Dash, Pinkie © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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It would've been funny if we could see Pinkie Pie out of the comic by the 4th Panel to the right when she says "Hey Rainbow". I think that would add a lot of humor because we all know PP loves breaking the fourth wall, even in comics!
P.S. I would recommend using "Dashie" instead of "Dashy" because it appeals to more people since it has been used in many fanfics and subtitles in the show. That's my opinion though.
P.S.S I'm 14 by the way
The use of multiple backgrounds was a nice touch, it kept the comic from appearing too static.
One minor gripe I have with this is that Dash's tail is partially out of panel when she's sitting down, though perhaps it's a stylistic thing?
That aside, I like the writing, it's authentic to the show, not much to say there. I found it very funny and charming.
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