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First in Line by Toxic-Mario First in Line by Toxic-Mario
Ok....I'll say this now.....people have been demanding I get the eyes finally in the MLP style. :pissed: I got sooooo pissed off at some of you saying I couldn't do them. Well....anytime I get that....time to prove people wrong. Pinkie in the second to last panel....IDK why her eyes are off but oh well. :meow:


Anywho I finally got this out. This would have been out last week but I got soooo tied up in the collab comic with Tsitra360 that took 4 days. Forgive me if I withhold my apology cause that collab was awesome. :) But time to get back to my stuff.


Overall I'm pleased with the way this turned out. I took my time with this....I HATE doing sweet apple acres....all the trees...it's worse than Twilight's library.....ok maybe not. :XD: I find it amazing I do better at building settings now than outdoor setting. Anyway what you guys think of this comic? Like it? Comments and the occasion critique is helpful. I read them all remember.


Time spent: 20 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to us if you put this on a site or something.


Rainbow Dash, Pinkie © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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LOL XD

The only Prob. Is that I cant see wut she's saying (Rainy)

The words are too small for me but the other things are EPIC.

Keep Up The Good Work.
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The eyes look perfect to me. The expressions and poses are very well done, I particularly Dash's expression in panel 2, and Pinkie's in panel 5. Clearly true to the show in that fashion; emotive and cute.

The use of multiple backgrounds was a nice touch, it kept the comic from appearing too static.

One minor gripe I have with this is that Dash's tail is partially out of panel when she's sitting down, though perhaps it's a stylistic thing?

That aside, I like the writing, it's authentic to the show, not much to say there. I found it very funny and charming.
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arcader1 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*taps rainbowdashes shoulder* exuse me
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw! Poor Dashie... :meow: :meow: :meow:
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AlexandBelle1993 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Artist
If Dash stays there for a year then she will be the first in line
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Linkzilla Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Huh - Rainbow Dash is an Alcoholic?
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HereticalRosePetal Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
She never got the cider. She wanted to get a mug for once.
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In panel 5, I was expecting Pinkie to pull on Rainbow's tail from panel 4. :)
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scootaloo4805 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
pobre   dash:( (Sad) 
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GoldenPonyZ Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconrainbowdashsadplz: :iconsays3plz: Is this some kind of crueeeeelll joke?!
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Pandora-Dementia Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh how well you portrayed one of my favorite Dashie moments! Cute!
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The-Necromancer Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The-Necromancer believes this is what we call a "Charlie Brown" moment.
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