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First in Line by Toxic-Mario First in Line by Toxic-Mario
Ok....I'll say this now.....people have been demanding I get the eyes finally in the MLP style. :pissed: I got sooooo pissed off at some of you saying I couldn't do them. Well....anytime I get that....time to prove people wrong. Pinkie in the second to last panel....IDK why her eyes are off but oh well. :meow:


Anywho I finally got this out. This would have been out last week but I got soooo tied up in the collab comic with Tsitra360 that took 4 days. Forgive me if I withhold my apology cause that collab was awesome. :) But time to get back to my stuff.


Overall I'm pleased with the way this turned out. I took my time with this....I HATE doing sweet apple acres....all the trees...it's worse than Twilight's library.....ok maybe not. :XD: I find it amazing I do better at building settings now than outdoor setting. Anyway what you guys think of this comic? Like it? Comments and the occasion critique is helpful. I read them all remember.


Time spent: 20 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to us if you put this on a site or something.


Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Lauren Faust
Art Me
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LOL XD

The only Prob. Is that I cant see wut she's saying (Rainy)

The words are too small for me but the other things are EPIC.

Keep Up The Good Work.
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The eyes look perfect to me. The expressions and poses are very well done, I particularly Dash's expression in panel 2, and Pinkie's in panel 5. Clearly true to the show in that fashion; emotive and cute.

The use of multiple backgrounds was a nice touch, it kept the comic from appearing too static.

One minor gripe I have with this is that Dash's tail is partially out of panel when she's sitting down, though perhaps it's a stylistic thing?

That aside, I like the writing, it's authentic to the show, not much to say there. I found it very funny and charming.
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:iconpainter85:
Painter85 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
me: oh poor RD hmmm...
2 hours later
me: here RD made it myself by watching a video.
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ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dashie's tail breaks the 4th wall twice. DON'T LET HER GET LIKE PINKIE!!! WAAAAH!!

lol awsome comic
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arcader1 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*taps rainbowdashes shoulder* exuse me
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw! Poor Dashie... :meow: :meow: :meow:
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:iconalexandbelle1993:
AlexandBelle1993 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Artist
If Dash stays there for a year then she will be the first in line
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:iconlinkzilla:
Linkzilla Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Huh - Rainbow Dash is an Alcoholic?
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:iconhereticalrosepetal:
HereticalRosePetal Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
She never got the cider. She wanted to get a mug for once.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In panel 5, I was expecting Pinkie to pull on Rainbow's tail from panel 4. :)
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scootaloo4805 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
pobre   dash:( (Sad) 
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:icongoldenponyz:
GoldenPonyZ Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
:iconrainbowdashsadplz: :iconsays3plz: Is this some kind of crueeeeelll joke?!
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:iconpandora-dementia:
Pandora-Dementia Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh how well you portrayed one of my favorite Dashie moments! Cute!
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:iconthe-necromancer:
The-Necromancer Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The-Necromancer believes this is what we call a "Charlie Brown" moment.
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:iconskalopultondraw20:
SkalopultonDraw20 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
I hate seeing Dashie suffer.
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:iconxormak:
xormak Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me too. In the first season i wouldn't have cared just a little bit but now after her great character development...I just started to love heer *_*
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:iconaddy1235:
addy1235 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student Artist
Ditto.
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:iconcoolrose60:
Coolrose60 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Me toooooooooooooooo
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:iconcrystal665:
crystal665 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
poor dashie
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:iconcinidoodle:
cinidoodle Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
aww poor dashie!
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:icondiscordantprincess:
DiscordantPrincess Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Pffft, poor Dashie!
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zappo210 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
wamp wamp wa-wa-wa-wa-wa...
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:iconsecretlaser:
SecretLaser Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*cry XD*
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PowerSourceArts Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Here have some cider*gives it to her*
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uay778 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
sweeties belles party?
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MeganekkoPlymouth241 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Interface Designer
:iconpinkiepieplz:"Oh I know the answer to that one, too! Whatcha! WHO SAID LIFE WAS FAIR?"
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PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is Rainbow Dash old enough to drink?

I guess that Ponyville doesn't have an Over 21's rule.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ponyville cider is non-alcoholic.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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SavageTheronGuard Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
its just not fair I HAD TIME
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012   General Artist
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
Alas; the first in line, but the last to know...
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trygveblacktiger Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i understand she. Like it was a morning at scool and it was allways emty with ice now it was my turn on scool and one day i got there firsht but yea no ice cream to me
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah
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:iconbunniesrule6:
bunniesrule6 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
poor dashie
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DolphinBuster Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
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Austria-Man Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
Poor Rainbow Dash. The right place, but the wrong time. And what kind of party means Pinkie Pie?
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:iconthe-only-nyx-sparkle:
Trollie Pie pretty much?
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madman12000 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
Forever ciderless...
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:iconsquishgirl:
squishgirl Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012   Photographer
Poor rainbow dash
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconsquishgirl:
squishgirl Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012   Photographer
Will you make mlp fim: raionbow dash comic movie or show something anything rainbow dash you want
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mechatrain150 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
dont feel bad you where there when it ended dashie. :3
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:meow:
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mechatrain150 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
X3
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Psycho333 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
Poor RD *Gives her a big cup of Cider*
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AqomXG Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
Rainbow Dash: Duh....Dx

Hahahahahaha....very funny
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :D
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VICTOR2012 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
idk all your character drawings looks good to me
the backgrounds arent so clean but its still good
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
some are better than others
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MataNui1000 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Lawl. Poor Dashie. XD
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
indeed
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