Did I overkill this background? Maybe....did I make an idioms comic?....Pinkie - "Well DUH!" Not be one of my best comics in my eyes but I'll let you decide on that.
I haven't seen idiom comics being made so what is this I have a soda series and idiom series to work on? YES...well maybe. We'll see. Need to see if they are funny enough to come up with.
Keeping this description short. Hid a muffin in this...fairly easy this time to spot but hey I did have much to work with. Onto the next comic. Comments are always appreciated.
Time spent: 19 hours over 4 days How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
Oh Lyra the Wise!! Give me your wisdom so that I may understand!!
Most Twilight comics I see usually involve her being clueless and this looks like its one of them. For her being smart, she is pretty stupid.
I REALLY like the background in this one. You may think you overdid it but I think its amazing this time and the seats of hay are pretty cool too. I looked at this comic longer then the others which is a good sign that you could do this style again.
After staring at the comic for a bit, it made me think that why are they using hay as seats when its what they eat and they have benches to sit on anyway?
As ever, this is a perfect little comic - I can only give 4.5 for originality because, y'know, fanart is fanart - but there is one thing really detracting from it.
Twilight would know what fingers are, since she lives with Spike. Who has fingers. That the joke is on her not knowing something like that really bugs me, which is why the vision mark is low.
That all said, I really like the art style and ponies are always adorable. Your use of Twilight as the straight man is superb (it's just that this is the one kind of joke that really doesn't work for her character) and Lyra's just the very cutest li'l heap o' turquoise I ever did see.
Most Twilight comics I see usually involve her being clueless and this looks like its one of them.
I REALLY like the background in this one. You may think you overdid it but I think its amazing this time and the seats of hay are pretty cool too. I looked at this comic longer then the others which is a good sign that you could do this style again.
After staring at the comic for a bit, it made me think that why are they using hay as seats when its what they eat and they have benches to sit on anyway?
I CANT FIND THE MUFFIN!!!!
Twilight would know what fingers are, since she lives with Spike. Who has fingers. That the joke is on her not knowing something like that really bugs me, which is why the vision mark is low.
That all said, I really like the art style and ponies are always adorable. Your use of Twilight as the straight man is superb (it's just that this is the one kind of joke that really doesn't work for her character) and Lyra's just the very cutest li'l heap o' turquoise I ever did see.
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