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Love clean humor....that's how I roll. :D May not have the watchers as others but I feel proud sticking to something. I got to take a break from drawing Twilight and that library. It's just pure coincidence lately that I've been doing do many Twilight heavy or related comics. :O


Anyway....I have no freaking clue where the idea of this comic came from. :XD: Either way I really like how this came out. Definitely not my best work on the library. :( And the 3rd time ever I basically used one BG in the entire comic....but I detailed the hell out of it.


So yeah...hope you all like this. Back to funny comics....just how you like them. Comments and critques are helpful. Onto the next one! :D


Time spent: 18 hours over 3 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Twilight, Owlicious © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Overall, this is a Good comic, although I cannot give you very high stars for it.

Vision:Your vision got 4 stars because I can tell you had a good idea for the comic and you tried to recreate a very old joke. I'd say that your original vision is good, but (no offence) the comic didn't come out as a very impressive vision.

Originality:Your originality got a 2.5 because people have beat this dead horse, grinded it up, put it in play-doh, and shaped it again to try to bring it back to life. The way you tried to recreatethis was intedded good, but it...just didn't work out.

Technique: your tequnique is 4.5 stars because your characters and backround are very good. (at first i thought you copied off the show!) I also like the drawing and expressions of Owlisious. He is expressed well.

Impact:The impact is 3 stars because I kind of expected what might happen without looking ahead. Like I said, don't beat a dead horse unless you can bring it back to life.

Ya, so that's my critique. I hope it isn't unfair!