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Love clean humor....that's how I roll. May not have the watchers as others but I feel proud sticking to something. I got to take a break from drawing Twilight and that library. It's just pure coincidence lately that I've been doing do many Twilight heavy or related comics.
Anyway....I have no freaking clue where the idea of this comic came from. Either way I really like how this came out. Definitely not my best work on the library. And the 3rd time ever I basically used one BG in the entire comic....but I detailed the hell out of it.
So yeah...hope you all like this. Back to funny comics....just how you like them. Comments and critques are helpful. Onto the next one!
Time spent: 18 hours over 3 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
Twilight, Owlicious © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
Anyway....I have no freaking clue where the idea of this comic came from. Either way I really like how this came out. Definitely not my best work on the library. And the 3rd time ever I basically used one BG in the entire comic....but I detailed the hell out of it.
So yeah...hope you all like this. Back to funny comics....just how you like them. Comments and critques are helpful. Onto the next one!
Time spent: 18 hours over 3 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
Twilight, Owlicious © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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1347x4358px 1.04 MB
© 2012 - 2024 Toxic-Mario
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Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Overall, this is a Good comic, although I cannot give you very high stars for it.
Vision:Your vision got 4 stars because I can tell you had a good idea for the comic and you tried to recreate a very old joke. I'd say that your original vision is good, but (no offence) the comic didn't come out as a very impressive vision.
Originality:Your originality got a 2.5 because people have beat this dead horse, grinded it up, put it in play-doh, and shaped it again to try to bring it back to life. The way you tried to recreatethis was intedded good, but it...just didn't work out.
Technique: your tequnique is 4.5 stars because your characters and backround are very good. (at first i thought you copied off the show!) I also like the drawing and expressions of Owlisious. He is expressed well.
Impact:The impact is 3 stars because I kind of expected what might happen without looking ahead. Like I said, don't beat a dead horse unless you can bring it back to life.
Ya, so that's my critique. I hope it isn't unfair!