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May not have the watchers as others but I feel proud sticking to something. I got to take a break from drawing Twilight and that library. It's just pure coincidence lately that I've been doing do many Twilight heavy or related comics. 
Either way I really like how this came out. Definitely not my best work on the library. 
And the 3rd time ever I basically used one BG in the entire comic....but I detailed the hell out of it.
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Vision:Your vision got 4 stars because I can tell you had a good idea for the comic and you tried to recreate a very old joke. I'd say that your original vision is good, but (no offence) the comic didn't come out as a very impressive vision.
Originality:Your originality got a 2.5 because people have beat this dead horse, grinded it up, put it in play-doh, and shaped it again to try to bring it back to life. The way you tried to recreatethis was intedded good, but it...just didn't work out.
Technique: your tequnique is 4.5 stars because your characters and backround are very good. (at first i thought you copied off the show!) I also like the drawing and expressions of Owlisious. He is expressed well.
Impact:The impact is 3 stars because I kind of expected what might happen without looking ahead. Like I said, don't beat a dead horse unless you can bring it back to life.
Ya, so that's my critique. I hope it isn't unfair!
The art is quite well done, it's very similar to the show in question and cleanly presented. which is both good and bad, its good in terms of artistic quality which is always important but It's not leaving any room for anything new or imaginative is it? (then again its just a small gag comic, like something I'd find in the newspaper that gives me a little giggle. I'm not expecting it to redefine war and peace for me am I? make of that what you will)
Also the text bubbles/"action sounds" are a little distracting, working on them a little would improve the quality considerably as its (artistically) the only thing I can really find wrong with this.
I do quite like the way all of Owloysius's panels are conveyed through simply motion and eye movements. its subtle and entertaining without being ruined by anything else more than it needs.
This comic is not the most original thing in the world but then again it doesn't have to be, it amused me for a few seconds, I moved on, didn't have any real complaints. I don't find it as good as some of your other comics but I didn't dislike it, I rather like its simplicity in places.
But that's just my tuppence on the piece, and I hope you make more.
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