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PRE-EPISODE COMIC! :D And not this is not a spoiler comic at all.


Ok this....this was just too much fun to do. Well....except more of the library....but the bedroom is much asier I will say. XD: But yeah another pre-episode comic. I really couldn't pass up the chance to do this before anyone else. It was just too good of a synopsis. Older Twilight and younger Twilight....SO MUCH TWILIGHT! :D


But yeah there's some flaws with this comic but overall I like how older Twilight's design came out. Fun thinking of a slightly different version and just coming up with your own story why she's going back to the past. This whole synopis smells like 10% of something DBZ used to do. :P Oh well.


Anyway enjoy this one guys. Comments and critiques are helpful. Lets see how accurate this is.....onto the next one!


Time spent: 25 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Twilight © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I really like this.
What is good about this piece is that it looks almost like screen caps taken out of the show(I´m assuming it is all selfmade).

The only notable differences are the facial expressions and the fact that we never saw a clock in the library to my knowledge.
Different doesn´t automatically mean worse, though in this case the face in panel 3 looks kinda off to me. Can´t point the finger exactly on it, but it looks weird.
That´s also the half point of technique I subtracted.

The other thing I see potential for you to improve is the difference between the 2 Twilights.
I had to look twice to notice one of them has longer hair and I think slightly more saturated colors? I was also not sure if she were hallucinating or time travelling.
Don´t know where and if to subtract points for that(categories are strange).

Apart from that, I can´t find anything bad. At all.
Very true to the original in artstyle. Consider that a Yahtzee style critique, everything I don´t mention is perfectly fine.