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Clock is Ticking by Toxic-Mario Clock is Ticking by Toxic-Mario
PRE-EPISODE COMIC! :D And not this is not a spoiler comic at all.


Ok this....this was just too much fun to do. Well....except more of the library....but the bedroom is much asier I will say. XD: But yeah another pre-episode comic. I really couldn't pass up the chance to do this before anyone else. It was just too good of a synopsis. Older Twilight and younger Twilight....SO MUCH TWILIGHT! :D


But yeah there's some flaws with this comic but overall I like how older Twilight's design came out. Fun thinking of a slightly different version and just coming up with your own story why she's going back to the past. This whole synopis smells like 10% of something DBZ used to do. :P Oh well.


Anyway enjoy this one guys. Comments and critiques are helpful. Lets see how accurate this is.....onto the next one!


Time spent: 25 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Twilight Lauren Faust
Art Me
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:iconw0nderbolts:
My first critique but want to share my thoughts, when I first saw the comic drawn in action, from the characters, to the background and down to the smallest details, you do your work slowly and with patience. This gives much greater results and shows the viewers that you are a great artist.

When the comic is finished and I read the whole comic and look at how well it was drawn and colored, it makes me want to look at everything, even the stuff that you normally wouldn't look at. Like the bookcases even if there is nothing special about it. Heck, I read this comic a few times to keep the thrill of it alive awhile longer before submitting a comment. Many more people should see your work in action and experience it for themselves.
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:iconmataza1988:
I really like this.
What is good about this piece is that it looks almost like screen caps taken out of the show(I´m assuming it is all selfmade).

The only notable differences are the facial expressions and the fact that we never saw a clock in the library to my knowledge.
Different doesn´t automatically mean worse, though in this case the face in panel 3 looks kinda off to me. Can´t point the finger exactly on it, but it looks weird.
That´s also the half point of technique I subtracted.

The other thing I see potential for you to improve is the difference between the 2 Twilights.
I had to look twice to notice one of them has longer hair and I think slightly more saturated colors? I was also not sure if she were hallucinating or time travelling.
Don´t know where and if to subtract points for that(categories are strange).

Apart from that, I can´t find anything bad. At all.
Very true to the original in artstyle. Consider that a Yahtzee style critique, everything I don´t mention is perfectly fine.
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FlairTheDark Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student Artist
wait wat? im confused O.o
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Jarkes Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
...Okay, I'm pretty sure out of the last 8 comics of yours I just looked at, ONE of them was the first comic of yours that I saw... but NONE of them were already in my favorites, so I have no clue...
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Rainbow10dash Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I adore the future twi in this one because of her mane and tail
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ADautistoHD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Twilight! You can't do that! You'll cause a time paradox!
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:iconpowersourcearts:
PowerSourceArts Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SHE'S NOT SCIENTIFICALLY POSSIBLE !
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YourBuddyBill Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, just to let you know, you might wanna fix up your text method, the bottoms of your "g"s, "j"s, "p"s, "q"s, and "y"s are being cut off. Most obvious in "go wrong" in the third panel.
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012   General Artist
This would've been a better story for that episode, but it might not get a Friendship Report.
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Eratosthenes-fan1 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
I've never thought some kind of tale! It could be nice to see the whole story, although I could imagine it! Well done!I've never thought some kind of tale! It could be nice to see the whole story, although I could imagine it! Well done!
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :D
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:iconeratosthenes-fan1:
Eratosthenes-fan1 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
I've never thought some kind of tale! It could be nice to see the whole story, although I could imagine it! Well done!
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
I wonder if its the Roman treetop catapult stunt?
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:iconlorddivinity:
LordDivinity Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student General Artist
love future twilghts look way better then younger twilights look for some reason o__O
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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Artgirl513 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
I'd love to see a sequel to this.
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:iconmeatabex:
Meatabex Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeeh time paradoxes are confusing! XD
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
This would have actually been FUN! Opposed to the actual episode.
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:iconhmorris73:
HMorris73 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
You didn't like the ep?
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:iconalexwarlorn:
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
I can understand the message. And I appreciate the stable time loop but . . the entire thing feels like miss moment of awesome.
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HMorris73 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
Hm, in some ways maybe. There are a lot more awesome things they could have done with the ep, and I think the writer knew it. Spike's "I wish Twilight would go on epic adventures more often" comment can't have been a coincidence. In any case though while it didn't make my favs list I'd personally rank still rank it as above average for the season. My only real regret is that I would like to know what Twilight was planning to do against Cerberus...
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know right XD
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:iconalexwarlorn:
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
Twilight Tragedy from "Discord Won" future timeline says in emotionless but contempting voice, "Playtime's over."
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SpyKrueger Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
I have to say, I would have prefered this plotline than the one they used in "It's about time".
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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Renee-Moonveil Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is very cool^^
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :D
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:iconrenee-moonveil:
Renee-Moonveil Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
welcome^^
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MataNui1000 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Nice work. :) Also, those two REALLY look alike.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconmatanui1000:
MataNui1000 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
No problem. :3
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:iconshadowfiredragon7:
shadowfiredragon7 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love the future Twilight's look. she just looks so much better than the regular Twilight
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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shadowfiredragon7 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem ^_^
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Pictorico Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
Well, thanks to the clip that was relased on YouTube today, I can say this is in fact accurate!

...

...there are two Twilights in it.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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SpyKrueger Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
You could say that Twilight...
*Puts sunglasses on*
...will need a Doctor.
*Doctor Who theme*

...


Okay, I'll stop now.
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:P
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:iconspykrueger:
SpyKrueger Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
Look's like the fun...
*Puts on sunglasses*
...has been doubled.
YYYYYEEEEEAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDDDD
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TheBronzeGryphon Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Your backgrounds, as usual, are exceptional. The only difference between Future Twilight and Present Twilight that I can discern, however, is the length of the mane. Hmm... I think we could have done with more age modifiers, depending on the amount of time between (Twilight makes a horrible mistake) and (Twilight discovers the Travel Time spell). It could have been more dramatic, but even as-is, I have no idea what's going on. For a pre-episode comic, that isn't bad. But I fully expect an updated version once the actual episode airs. Don't disappoint me!
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Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDD well see
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DJ-TON3 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate how your art is so awesome, it makes me jealous :P
And someone needs to draw a "Don't drink that last glass of cider at the bar with Big Mack!" where Future Twilight has a *ahem* bigger belly....

Keep up my favorite comics! :icondashishappyplz:
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i shall
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:iconspykrueger:
SpyKrueger Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Looks like we've entered...
*Puts on sunglasses*
...The Twilight Zone.
YYYYYYEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL win!
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marplatense2 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
I'm looking forward to the episode, it sounds really interesting, plus I want to see Twilight go crazy again! XD
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAY!
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1tailnaruto Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
Wait, wait, slow down...How are there 2 Twilights?
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:icontoxic-mario:
Toxic-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
epsidoe synopsis
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1tailnaruto Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
:shrug: Works for me.
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stotans Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
I always thought it would be Doctor Whooves or at least Pinkie Pie that would cause this scenario.
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