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Clock is Ticking by Toxic-Mario Clock is Ticking by Toxic-Mario
PRE-EPISODE COMIC! :D And not this is not a spoiler comic at all.


Ok this....this was just too much fun to do. Well....except more of the library....but the bedroom is much asier I will say. XD: But yeah another pre-episode comic. I really couldn't pass up the chance to do this before anyone else. It was just too good of a synopsis. Older Twilight and younger Twilight....SO MUCH TWILIGHT! :D


But yeah there's some flaws with this comic but overall I like how older Twilight's design came out. Fun thinking of a slightly different version and just coming up with your own story why she's going back to the past. This whole synopis smells like 10% of something DBZ used to do. :P Oh well.


Anyway enjoy this one guys. Comments and critiques are helpful. Lets see how accurate this is.....onto the next one!


Time spent: 25 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Twilight Lauren Faust
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:iconw0nderbolts:
My first critique but want to share my thoughts, when I first saw the comic drawn in action, from the characters, to the background and down to the smallest details, you do your work slowly and with patience. This gives much greater results and shows the viewers that you are a great artist.

When the comic is finished and I read the whole comic and look at how well it was drawn and colored, it makes me want to look at everything, even the stuff that you normally wouldn't look at. Like the bookcases even if there is nothing special about it. Heck, I read this comic a few times to keep the thrill of it alive awhile longer before submitting a comment. Many more people should see your work in action and experience it for themselves.
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:iconmataza1988:
I really like this.
What is good about this piece is that it looks almost like screen caps taken out of the show(I´m assuming it is all selfmade).

The only notable differences are the facial expressions and the fact that we never saw a clock in the library to my knowledge.
Different doesn´t automatically mean worse, though in this case the face in panel 3 looks kinda off to me. Can´t point the finger exactly on it, but it looks weird.
That´s also the half point of technique I subtracted.

The other thing I see potential for you to improve is the difference between the 2 Twilights.
I had to look twice to notice one of them has longer hair and I think slightly more saturated colors? I was also not sure if she were hallucinating or time travelling.
Don´t know where and if to subtract points for that(categories are strange).

Apart from that, I can´t find anything bad. At all.
Very true to the original in artstyle. Consider that a Yahtzee style critique, everything I don´t mention is perfectly fine.
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:iconjarkes:
...Okay, I'm pretty sure out of the last 8 comics of yours I just looked at, ONE of them was the first comic of yours that I saw... but NONE of them were already in my favorites, so I have no clue...
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:iconrainbow10dash:
I adore the future twi in this one because of her mane and tail
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:iconadautistohd:
Twilight! You can't do that! You'll cause a time paradox!
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:iconpowersourcearts:
PowerSourceArts Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SHE'S NOT SCIENTIFICALLY POSSIBLE !
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YourBuddyBill Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, just to let you know, you might wanna fix up your text method, the bottoms of your "g"s, "j"s, "p"s, "q"s, and "y"s are being cut off. Most obvious in "go wrong" in the third panel.
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TransformerRobot Jul 30, 2012   General Artist
This would've been a better story for that episode, but it might not get a Friendship Report.
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:iconeratosthenes-fan1:
I've never thought some kind of tale! It could be nice to see the whole story, although I could imagine it! Well done!I've never thought some kind of tale! It could be nice to see the whole story, although I could imagine it! Well done!
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Toxic-Mario Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :D
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:iconeratosthenes-fan1:
I've never thought some kind of tale! It could be nice to see the whole story, although I could imagine it! Well done!
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:iconcentaur71:
I wonder if its the Roman treetop catapult stunt?
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