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A Little Boost by Toxic-Mario A Little Boost by Toxic-Mario
:iconfluttershysqueeplz:NOT one of my best comics...but hey...gotta have a so-so comic here and there....cause the next 5 ones are always more epic! :D Trust me...wait till you see what's next...back to pure canon stuff! If you can find the hidden muffin in this comic I'll be impressed.


Don't worry guys. I'm not gonna do a run of cider comics. I just wanted to get this last one out of the way before I get back to my more regular comics...although this kind of is one of those rare non-canon comics technically. :XD: Anyway it's actually hilarious to think of this happening in the show. Scootaloo flying off cider...almost hints at Peter Pan...weird. Sweet Apple Acres > Twilight's Library as far as annoying to draw. :fear:


Anyway enjoy this comic guys. Truely is a random one......odd how I do building BG better than outdoor BGs at times......that's not suppose to happen. I...am weird. :O Comments and Critiques do help.


Time spent: 22-24 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Scootaloo, Rainbow Dash Lauren Faust
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:iconw0nderbolts:
Amazing work just like the other ones you made, of course you don't need me to tell you this since I watch it during LiveStreams and comment there but anyways.

I may be losing it but Scootaloo's wings look a little too big throughout the whole comic (I may be wrong). Some panels have the wings slightly bigger then the others but its probably because she's going pretty fast but just mentioning it here.

While I was reading this, it made me think of Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory Movie where they eat (or drink idk) something and float up towards a dangerous fan. How many of you thought of this when she started floating? :XD: I just hope that if she burps, the ability to fly doesn't wear off. O.O

Either Rainbow Dash is shocked just cause she can finally fly or she just can't live her own life anymore because Pinkie Pie with her on the ground and Scootaloo in the sky. :XD:

Review done but I am wondering if there will ever be an Applebloom comic (unless it was already made).
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Critique may be a little harsh (Please don't hate me, feel free to mark as 'unfair' if you believe I wasn't lenient enough)

Vision - In the description you say this isn't one of your best. While I do love your comics this one was pretty weak.

Originality - You defied my expectations by not having Scootaloo get drunk, but I feel like there's a missing punchline. I don't know how cider is supposed to make her fly.

Technique - Your style hasn't faltered. While not 100% accurate you come very close to the show's style.

Impact - This is where I have to be the bad guy. This comic is... Well... Forgettable. Not much to it, no real joke or punchline. You've made emotional comics before but if this is supposed to be one, I don't get it. The cider making her fly is just weird. Maybe it's a Red Bull joke, but if so it's still not very memorable.

This is the first harsh critique I've given. I tried to give my best constructive criticisms and I swear I have no harsh feelings or malcontent.
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Morris4480 6 days ago  New member
Red bull...gives you wings.

wait-
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:iconi-love-daisy:
that is awsome XD
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starexploderkitty14 Mar 31, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Red bull really DOES give you wings!
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oceanscar Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i found the muffin! great comic!
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:iconxormak:
xormak Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think aftre this cider, Scoots feels very "high" -_-
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:iconsora200:
LOLOLOLOLOL! It's red bull!!!
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:iconbrander103:
brander103 Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
muffin: 3rd panel, lower fence post gap, far left, behind tree root, time: 10 seconds.
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katban Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the moral of this story children is: drink all the cider you can one day you to can fly high like Rainbow Dash!
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:iconkeaton-furman-prower:
Maybe it was Red Bull (Red Minotaur?) instead of cider?
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AlexKazhdan Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That would make a lot more sense.
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